Soo true - soo many girls make that mistake and it happens all the time, always has always will. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

I can so relate.

A very hard poem. The structure is well flown and the rhymes are good. It's really a painful story, I guess some can relate to it. 4/5, was a little shallow.

I dont know what to comment,,, but i feel like commenting but what,,, its a sad poem but it makes me laugh,,, good work yaar

You explained the contempt to the situation very well. The images you gave were good and the fow was very well done Plot121

Wow...I'am sad to say this but about 90% of our society is made up of that. So true though....

Love the poem its so true

This was really good

Hey !
this is really good !
the first stanza made me laugh XD

i think ive read this before somewhere. lol

tc

This was soooo awseomely written.
i read it to my g-ma and we both loved it.
it's so true what it says.
this was friggin awesome.
I wish i could give you an award for it.
DAMN.....

I liked this piece, it shows the struggles and pressures of sex in a relationship and the consequences afterwards, although i do hope its not all true.

well done on a nice piece of work.

5/5

Gary.

I liked this piece, it shows the struggles and pressures of sex in a relationship and the consequences afterwards, although i do hope its not all true.

well done on a nice piece of work.

5/5

Gary.

Nice, was very powerful and you just said everything streight out, really liked it. Just sad that life does so. People surely can relate to it, and I hope some learn from this poem also.
Amazing write! 5/5

Really great. The emotion flowed very well. Excellent writing!!!

Honestly, I'm blown away. I'd have to say this is your best poem, maybe because I like the explicit content, or maybe because its mechanically flawless, the rhyme scheme is impeccable, or the unrelenting truth behind it but its a great piece in my opinion. 5/5

Wow this is very different from all the other ones you have written. But it is so true men get the pleasure women get the pain...the whole time!

HA HA, THIS ONE'S FUNNY. I REMEMBER THE FIRST TIME U SHOWED ME THIS.

Lol...i think i read this poem somewhere...very true though huh!

Damn alot of emotion and hate in this one..i loved it :) lol. The way I read it it was a short and choppy poem, but if it flowed I don't think it wouldve got the angry message across.

Really good poem :) 5/5

Touching poem, Every word you written was true. It can relate to many people. You know, instead using the bad words, you should've used formal words, it would have been much better. Other then that, your poem was splendid 5/5.

Take care,

Sarah A.