by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA Oct 24, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I sit here and wonder |
AND ANOTHER ONE! |
AND ANOTHER ONE! |
by Robert
You again expressed yourself quite well the images invited your reader and the flow was good. There are a few major spelling adjustments in this so I would read over it again and take care of that other then that a good poem Plot121 |