by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA Oct 24, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Your love was a lie |
DON'T WORRY BABY, UR WITH ME NOW N I WON'T LIE TO U. =] |
by Shinobi
Sad feeling touches after reading this poem. A person who says he loves you but he lies all the time. Rhyming and flow were a bit off. 4/5 |
by SpEcIaLmE
I luv this poem completely :) it flowed nicley and i luv the way u kept enforcing the fact that everything was a lie |
by JustKristina
I really liked this one, it shows emotion like no other! the repetition of saying that it was a lie over and over again shows what is goin on through our head when something like this happens. i liked it! keep up the good work! :o] |