I really liked this one, it shows emotion like no other! the repetition of saying that it was a lie over and over again shows what is goin on through our head when something like this happens. i liked it! keep up the good work! :o]

I luv this poem completely :) it flowed nicley and i luv the way u kept enforcing the fact that everything was a lie

5/5

Sad feeling touches after reading this poem. A person who says he loves you but he lies all the time. Rhyming and flow were a bit off. 4/5

DON'T WORRY BABY, UR WITH ME NOW N I WON'T LIE TO U. =]