I never wanted to loose hope- loose- lose?
Other than that line, the rest of the poem is flawless. I like the way you wrote it portraying so many emotions within the lines.
This poem touched me. You have good rhymes which created nice flow.
My favorite stanza is:

-I never wanted to let go
I never wanted to say goodbye
I never wanted to stop loving you
Stop looking into your eyes-

One more small mistake: You repeated the word away in the third stanza two times. Maybe you could do that like this:
-I never wanted it to go astray (or something like that)
For you to be so far away
I never wanted you to say
You love someone else-

That's just my opinion^^^
All in all, this is interesting and emotional piece.
5/5

I really liked this! very emotional and full of feeling, kept me wanting to read more. it as also very easy to relate to. keep it up! :o]

The flow was a little off for me but changing or removing a word here and there would clean it up a bit. Nice emotion and feeling behind it though. Good work.

I like it. It shows your emotions, good work!

Wow this is so good. I loved it. You poured your heart out on this one and I like the raw emotion you desplayed in this.

I felt it, He must of also.
nice job.

AND ANOTHER ONE FOR HIM.