Aww this one is really sweet but it lacks structure.. it was full of emotion though! i think it was really a great poem! :0]

I liked this alot, though the structure did lack, I believe again if you put this into a poetic form it would look much neater and be easier to read. The meaning was great though and portrayed deep sadness within each word that was written. Well done none the less to your boyfriend or whoever wrote it. ~Mel

It was beautiful! The last two lines just tied in the poem perfectly. The imagery was effective and overall a great poem. *5/5*

HEY, THIS IS MY POEM. I WROTE THIS ONE WHEN U WERE MAD AT ME, REMEMBER?