Friendship

by FridusBlueheaven   Oct 24, 2007


Title : Friendship
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

If the friendship is a thing that really matter
And then why the difference could make it over
Pain and lies beneath the madness in anger
Will never make anything better than ever

If the friendship is everything we do need
Have you ever thought this could be that sweet?
Ever since the friendship is the air you breathe
And then why you should go just to over it

If the friendship is the best thing ever made
Possibly the sweetest thing you ever create
A little friend might be our long life soulmate
But there are too many problems to contemplate

If the friendship is the best thing you've ever had
And then why you should hurt it by the time instead
Their name is on, they'll always stuck in your head
But simply it'll gone when you're in a big mad

If the friendship is the only thing to make you fine
When you don't have it, you keep waiting in line
When the meaning of it is too hard to define
Day after day, hope the sincerity will never decline

If the friendship is the thing that really best
When it's hard, you know it must be a test
Well we should never put it to a big mess
It will always there and never love you less

2007 Blueheaven Entertainment (c)
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  • Very sweet poem. I understand everything about friendships because I have had bad ones and good ones, and you expressed the feeling really well. Except for the grammatical errors, it's all perfect. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    I do not think this was one of your best. There were mistakes throughout which made it hard to read. I had to read sentences over because there were words or grammar missing. All in all I could relate with it and it was a good poem. *4/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    This poem is really good..

    The thought in it was really deep..
    It spoke to my heart

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by danielle

    THIS IS WOW good keep it up it had great emtion and meaning to it keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    I love this poem as well,
    great meaning,
    and full of emotion.
    excellent work =)