My Version of Love

by Jason   Oct 24, 2007


When I think of a woman,
I think of one that shows her love to me.
And when we make love,
We spend time having fun in bed.

But love is more than just having fun in bed.
Love is showing concern and giving her advice.
Love is in a heart that's deeply red,
And engaging in thrills with her is a vice.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    Beautiful poem Jason. The concept was good, punctuation, grammar, and spelling was excellent. I didn't see any problems really, except that the flow was a little off. I think you should use this as a draft and add a little more to it. I could actually envision the description that you gave, so that was a great thing. Lol. Keep up the good work and I look forward to working with you.

    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by missing you

    Awww your sweet babe xox

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