Awww your sweet babe xox

Beautiful poem Jason. The concept was good, punctuation, grammar, and spelling was excellent. I didn't see any problems really, except that the flow was a little off. I think you should use this as a draft and add a little more to it. I could actually envision the description that you gave, so that was a great thing. Lol. Keep up the good work and I look forward to working with you.

Letty