Really a mystical piece!! But I m stunned how a nice piece like this could remain hidden to all !!
5/5

Oh my God! o.O That was just frigging amazing! LOL. I'm shocked! I wonder why I didn't read this before, something kept telling me I should. Now I know why, it's brilliantly amazingly awesome, LOL. It's... breathtaking, and again I love your ending.

I like this poem a lot. :) It reminds me some of my characters in Rise of Waters, it simply took my breath away. I got lost in your words, for they were profoundly amazing and the way you used them was encouraging.
I love it. Wow.

I wish I could give you a higher rate, 5/5 doesn't cut it. I swear. LOL.
Keep it up, I love your poetry. :) It amazes me to the fullest, and that's not easy to do. ;) So you made it. LOL. Inspiration is simply an amazing thing.
Great job. 5/5

Take care! :)