Love Is
by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA Oct 24, 2007
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One of the things more sad in life is when you meet someone that means everything, and only to find out that they weren't for you, and have to let it go. It hurts to love the wrong person. But what is more painful is loving someone and not have the strength to tell them. Maybe GOD wants us to meet a couple of people of the wrong people before we meet the right person so that in the end when we meet them, we know to be grateful for the wonderful gift. |
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16 years ago
YES IT IS BABE. I WILL ALWAYS GIVE U MY LUV.
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17 years ago
Firstly, i love the last line. And i like the message but i think it would be better if you edited and put it into stanzas. Still, great write.
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17 years ago
by Roxiee An
Not have the strength
should be
not to have the strength
couple of people of the wrong people
sounds wrong
we know to be grateful for the wonderful gift.
somethings missing here
you just foccused on the ideas and not on framing the poem
thoughts were good cos I understood what you are trying to say but in my own way
4/5 is what I can give
space it well by edititing
tc,
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17 years ago
by Melpomene
I liked this one alot, I found it to be really deep though not poetry like prob because of the way it is set up. I think if you put this piece into stanzas it would make the poem look alot neater. Loved the deep meaning of this so Overall a 5/5 from me on this. Keep up the great work.
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17 years ago
That was great! and so true
