by Tammie Oct 24, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
If I sewed all the prettiest words together just for you, |
by Polaroid
That reminds me of one of my friends who have been really depressed latley |
by Prophecies In Kodak
"Diary entries and suicide notes scattered around your room" |
by Mousie
It was good, something i can relate to for the most part, and i really thought you had some good wording and good vocab in there. It could use some tweeking but i think all poems can when you go back and really look at them. Good job though, you're a talented writer with a lot of feeling in yours poems and i like that. |
by Tim
Its like i felt it... you wrote this so well |
This Is Really Great And Your Words In This Are So Powerful And Real And Passionate.. Broken Friendshipz Suck And You Wonder What You Have Done To Deserve Them.. Some Parts In This I Can Relate Too And YOur Flow And Your Way Of Expressing Things were Really Well Done.. Loved It 5/5 |