I love this poem, it is filled with sincerely expressed emotions and really good and vivid descriptions. I like the way you wrote it- It has good flow and everyone can relate to it in some way. Some parts of this piece truly touched me.
My favorite stanza is:

-Diary entries and suicide notes scattered around your room
As you sit listening to the song we used to call ours
'Everything I ever did was all for you, all for you'
Remembering us scream those lyrics together for hours.-

Great job, keep up!

Ouch.. broken frienships arent nice nor easy.. you did well expressing yourself here.. seemed like a well thought out piece.. what i liked the most were the beginning and end.. great job there.. some stanzas hit me hard.. very good write.. keep it up

~angel~

Wow this is a really good poem!!

This Is Really Great And Your Words In This Are So Powerful And Real And Passionate.. Broken Friendshipz Suck And You Wonder What You Have Done To Deserve Them.. Some Parts In This I Can Relate Too And YOur Flow And Your Way Of Expressing Things were Really Well Done.. Loved It 5/5
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Its like i felt it... you wrote this so well

It was good, something i can relate to for the most part, and i really thought you had some good wording and good vocab in there. It could use some tweeking but i think all poems can when you go back and really look at them. Good job though, you're a talented writer with a lot of feeling in yours poems and i like that.

"Diary entries and suicide notes scattered around your room"

That line kind of put me off. I didnt really like it very much. Otherwise, this poem was quite bitter and lovely. The emotion was fluid.

You did a wonderful job.

That reminds me of one of my friends who have been really depressed latley

very well written you are truly an amazing person