Vary nicely worded...I love the emotion potrayed in this poem. keep it up! 5/5 XD

Heluva flow, hard hitting words and more deep meaning than a night with a philosopher.great poem, nice to see anutha masterpiece been missing ur work 5/5 xx

I really liked this one thanks for leaving me a comment to, nice work

That was very good. I liked all the little details. Keep up the GOOD work (:

This poem is really great, i love the way you write with so much passion. 5/5

This is a great poem. Full of imagery. 5/5
-vino

Love this poem you did an excellent job...you deffently have a way with words

Wow, this was great!
Your choice of words created really vivid imagery and the use of verbs was effective!
5/5
xxx.

5/5! awesome imagery! u really helped us see watz u r describin on diz poem!

Good poem
everyline

Your Poetry Is Simply Divine!
I Love The Choice of Your Simply Words
Yet With Complex & Heart-felt Meaning!
I Definitely Encourage You To Keep On Writing
& Its Guaranteed I Will Keep On Reading!
100/100.

Ox.

Woww...
that was great..
i loved it.. =]]
Great Job...

♥Sara

Really nice poem... your sadness is felt in ur words.. great job!

Man you say i wrote that one poem well, look at your own, I love this one, it is so sad. It made me almost ry, those tears were shining in my eyes. But this is just pure dark...but wonderful...!!! I felt every pain and emotion in every single word of this poem<3

Keep up the good work,[5/5 but i would 1000]
~*>CourtneyxHolland<*~

Great usage of words, very nicely written

all the best and take care

Wow! great 5/5

Wow.. this poem was so creepy and as I read it, it felt like it had a dark blanket covering it. It was very mysterious, I've never seen a poem written like this one before. Very good though. Keep up the awesome job! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Oh wow.. that gave me shivers.. great work.. oh wow again! haha the words were so powerful and strong.. the imagery was amazing and the flow was great! keep up the freakin awesome work! haha :D

M-azing!!!!

This is strong and powerful. The flow was constant and it kept me in. You're brilliant!
5000000/5 >>
-ally

P.S-
Thanks fer the comment!

THis is great, your one of the better writers I have read. Thanks for the comments on my poems.