This one was overall very good, some of the rhyming seemed forced like you couldn't think of anyother word. i think that maybe a repetition of this stanza work work really well...
If you want to be loved
If you want your love life to come true
It's time for a serious change
It's all up to you
I really liked them lines... keep up the great work! :o]

I like the poem. It's really good.

5/5

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This is a good poem, i like the fact that it is an eye opener and begins to open ideas into peoples heads :D xxx alex xxx

All of your poems seem to have this excellent meaning that you want to express to the reader. However, they can seem almost boring simply due to the lack in variety of words.

To get it straight, though, I enjoy your poems... they could just use a bit of improvement in the vocab department. 4/5

Well pretty nice! i love how u expressed ur feels in this poet! i understand if there are some errors but still u done a great job! nice one4/8

This was very meaningful. The ideas you expressed are ones many are faced with. The notion of having to change yourself just to be treated differently is confusing. Overall it was a good piece but I do advise you to expand your vocabulary because I know you can. *4/5*

To be honest I don't like this poem too much. This is just my opinion but I think that rhyming is forced and it isn't to original. Also you could use some metaphors to make this poem look deeper. With stronger words atmosphere that you created would be more powerful. I don't want to offend you, I just think that this poem needs many changes.

Pretty good poem! it didnt really flow well in some spots but overall it was a good poem! i love the idea behind the poem though, and really if people cant accept you for who you are..then they dont care...unless you are in really bad shape, then yeah, its time to make a change. good poem

Great job this poem really speaks to me i feel as if what you wrote is some how connected to me.
you are a freat poet keep up the good work.

I only havea a few complaints... the rhyming with blue.. and you flow was a a little choppy try getting about hte same amount of slylables in each line.. other than that your work is great.

5/5