A Suicide story

by iloveyouandrew   Oct 24, 2007


Im gonna tell you a story
I once knew this girl
and She commited Suicide

She just couldnt take it anymore
She felt fat, ugly, and she knew the one
she loved would never love her

Her mom left her
and Her family hated her
She didnt have many friends
She walked around lonely
and Tears always filling up her eyes

People always made fun of her
She just couldnt take it
She ran home crying
Almost Everyday....

But one day when she ran home
She took out her little friend
She took him to her wrists

Once the cold metal hit her skin
she lost control
The razor had tooken over her hand

She cut and cut until her whole arm was bleeding
She layed on the hardwood floor.
She felt everything go dark and she knew
She would finally be happy
She commited suicide...

Your prolly wondering why I no the story
So well...
Well...
That girl was me...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Suicidal Love

    Wow, i love the way you only said it was you right at the end! - very clever.
    great poem well done 5/5

    suicidal love xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina

    Omg that is rele sad...but very well written! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nula

    This poem is amazing...i love it

  • 17 years ago

    by OneLastKissBeforeIGo

    Happy Valentine's Day! I Love You!!! lol I know it's not Valentine's Day but I figured thats the only way I could tell you that and actually mean it. Thank you for commenting. I appreciate it. If you want you can message me anytime you feel like talking. ^ ^ k . You always have me.

    Kyanna

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittiny

    I love how you said it was someone you knew well i guess it is some one you really knew well thanks for the comment. i really like this poem keep it up 5/5