Suicide...one thing you could say after

by retro babii   Oct 24, 2007


Some would say I'm really sorry
I'd say I'm sorry too
some would say it's hard 'cause i miss you
i miss you, yes, i do
...
some would say my wrists i slit
i say that's too hard to hide
some would say life was too hard
i say it's better once you've died
...
some would say i couldn't help it
i would say that's life
some would say i didn't mean to
but i meant to take that knife
...
some would say I'd do it different
i would say i tried
some would say i wouldn't do it
if I'd said it i would've lied

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  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    Wow. This tears away at my heart. It's so deep. I love the emotion in it. And the truth you've put in your regards towards suicide. It makes you think and yet it's so simple all at once. I love this poem. Beautiful. Kepp it up! =]
    --Viola

    p.s. thanks for the comment on mine.

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem is straight forward. i liked it alot. short and to the point. the flow was perfect and so was the wording. this must be one of my fav poems by you. keep up the good work!!

  • 16 years ago

    by lost dream

    Thats goooooood

  • 17 years ago

    by Kyle

    WOW!!!!!! i was blown away!!! it had like a really bouncy flow but it was sad, lol idk if that makes sense, it was like i had fun reading it, but the words were sad. wow....i ljust love it. beautiful job!5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    Damn good... i Love it... you poems are all great... 5/5

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