Secrets

by retro babii   Oct 24, 2007


She lives not here
but in a faraway land
the most favorite person
with the help-fullest hand
her life seems so simple
but few family know
of the secret that she
has to helplessly stow
...
she makes you smile
like a Labrador pup
she's the one right there waiting
to help pick you back up
the one who helps most
when things turn real bad
the best-est friend
you ever have had
...
she knows that to hide it
is really just dumb
still the secret is kept
for that of her mum
the secrets not hers
but it's just her way
to wonder what on earth
the neighbors would say
...
the sweating hands
the racing mind
what would she say
she seems so kind
you tell your 'dark' secret
this isn't a game
and then she tells you
that she's just the same

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  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    Thats really good i like it cause it relates to me.

  • 17 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I liked this poem quit a bit. although it was a bit confusing cause i didnt see where it would say wht the secret is. if you told the secret the poem would seem more sencful. but nice poem neways

  • 17 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow!! very awesome poem! i loved how you made the girl like very helpful yet theres more to her than the eyes sees, i love this poem! it has some mystery in it and that is fasctinating. very awesomely written. =)

  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This poem was good, but I saw a little mistake. Other than that, the poem was great and the flow was good.

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by retro babii

    Hi thnx 4 the comment
    shes my cousin/my best m8...thts the first bit...last verse is bout me telling her something
    :)

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