Very nice poem you got there... Who is she by the way? 5/5

Hi thnx 4 the comment
shes my cousin/my best m8...thts the first bit...last verse is bout me telling her something
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This poem was good, but I saw a little mistake. Other than that, the poem was great and the flow was good.

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Wow!! very awesome poem! i loved how you made the girl like very helpful yet theres more to her than the eyes sees, i love this poem! it has some mystery in it and that is fasctinating. very awesomely written. =)

I liked this poem quit a bit. although it was a bit confusing cause i didnt see where it would say wht the secret is. if you told the secret the poem would seem more sencful. but nice poem neways

Thats really good i like it cause it relates to me.