I really like the message this poem conveyed, but i think it will flow a little better if it has a little more structure. instead of just being all together. break it down.

We all think the same at some point. and it's true nothing changes. Everything just falls into place. likt it's supposed to. and when it fall in place it doesn't quite go as we want it...it's just life... so sad huh?

Anyway great poem!!! 5/5 XP

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

Things may or may not change, but our perspective does. :)