I love it!

Lol. kinda ew...but good

Honestly, it's a pretty good poem. It would be better if elaborated, but it's still good. Get's the point across.

It might also be better in the 'erotic' area, but at the same time I think it's fine here. I'm not too sure on that, just figured I'd suggest, maybe.

Hope to see some more poems. (:

Wow I have a poem dirty like that too but I didnt know we could put it on here its good in a sexual kinda way
Bridgette