The Hidden Silence

by silvertung69   Oct 24, 2007


I ride the hidden silence,
that's buried deep inside,
the noise it overwhelms me,
So loud it makes me cry.
Taken to the edge of it,
my emotions are rubbed raw,
please help me off this ride,
and to your arms I'll fall.
It's the hidden silence,
and that you can not be,
but if you ride it long enough,
the edge of it you'll see.
Darkened is the loneliness,
in between these plains,
and in the hidden silence,
the songs remain the same.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    That was so beautiful and profound! :) I loved the rhyme scheme and the format of the poem. You did a stupendous job. :) Way to go! :) 5/5

    Bri~

  • 15 years ago

    by ASHLEY BROOM

    Very overwhelming very true keep it up your good...........