After A Suicide...

by Hannah Mhairi   Oct 24, 2007


I mixed a drink,
And stole the pills,
I researched it all,
Knew it'd make me ill.

I thought I'd done it,
Thought I would be on the other side,
But my conscience kept nagging me,
With the truth locked up inside.

I went round smiling,
Until the drink caused one of my fits,
Then having lost my memory,
My body fell to bits.

I excused my self from classes,
To get my scissors out,
Blood spattered all over me,
Nobody knew what it was all about.

I left to go to the office,
I needed to take another few,
A girl saw the wall and screamed,
Now nearly everyone knew.

My friend took my scissors off me,
So I scratched like mad,
My thoughts were unstop-able,
Occurring frequently and more bad.

I scared my friend that day,
Trying to fall down the stairs,
My teachers took me to the deans,
And asked my mum to come up there.

Soon I lay in hospital,
wondering why I hadn't died,
For I still lived and breathed,
After my suicide.

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  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Wow, fantastic poem right here. Bring me to tear. You're great 5/5 from me!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by xxMagioxx

    This is probably my favorite poem you've written so far :) thxs for commenting on my stuff, I know so much about how you feel it hurts, literally :) I hope you feel better soon :D im here for you if you need it

    Tony :D love ya

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow! Awesome poem! it was amazing! Great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Darkness13

    This is amazing. I just wish you knew how bad this brought back memories for me. You're an amazing poet, and I can really feel the feelings put into it, and I can see the images. wow. simple.
    ~Angel Wings/Rozen~