Honestly, this one is really short but i think it really holds one deep and intimate meaning.. ha ha ha and i have to read it twice to get what you mean (but i guess everyone has different perception on this one, correct me if i'm worng but i thnk it means " for every problems and lonely moments in our lives there are hopes") good job!! ...

Im not a fan of haikus.. but this one was good.. something that i could imagine.. something that i could feel.. im not really in a good mood right now but this helped me calm down.. thanks

~angel~

Very beautiful piece you have here ... it truly paints an imagine with you words. Well done *5/5*

I love haikus they are really one of the most beautiful poetry styles because they portray so much in such little lines. I've never seen a rhymed haiku so this really caught my interest. You did an amazing job with it. The word choice gorgeous and beautiful which portrayed nice imagery into my mind. The atmosphere this created was calm and soothing. This could be seen in so many different ways, depending on the person. The meaning was great I could tell this wasn't jsut a nature poem it held more depth behind it. Such a deep poem. Overall you deserve a 5/5 well done. Keep up the great work. ~Mel

Its great but I'm not sure if haikus are suppose to rhyme. This isthe first one I've seen that rhymes, its nice, but I think it brought down the quality of the poem. Great job though, keep it up 4/5

A rhyming haiku.. that's new. But i think it still is one, since you followed the form, right? I don't know.
This is such a beautiful piece and it conveyed great imagery as well. Wonderful job.