by twistedlover Oct 24, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The man of shattered soul |
by Anonymous
Um. ok. original I guess. kinda gettin there with the rythm, nice flow for the most part. In some parts it sounds like you were trying a little to hard to rhyme. other than that it was okay, nice twist at the end. 3/5 but A for effort. |
by December
Love the poem it is really good, nice flow to it keep it up I wanna read more! |
by xxSuicidalxx
Aww....i love this so sad and heartbreaking....keep it up! :) 5/5 |
Even though this is a sad poem, I loved it. You should clean up the words a bit and it would look perfect. |