Even though this is a sad poem, I loved it. You should clean up the words a bit and it would look perfect.

Keep it up!!!

4/5

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Aww....i love this so sad and heartbreaking....keep it up! :) 5/5

Love the poem it is really good, nice flow to it keep it up I wanna read more!

Um. ok. original I guess. kinda gettin there with the rythm, nice flow for the most part. In some parts it sounds like you were trying a little to hard to rhyme. other than that it was okay, nice twist at the end. 3/5 but A for effort.