A gray shade. The neutral place with no good or evil. A really interesting subject raised here in a great flow and rhyming. well done 5/5

Very powerful and meaning poem you have here. Each word held such power that it all flowed beautifully. The imagey was great and your vocabulary was effective. Wel ldone *5/5*

I really love the writing in this - its smooth and flowing and rhythmic. the way you describe your life is pretty original - at first i thought the shades of grey were like when people are on drugs or something, but the way it turned out was really cool . . wish i could describe how i live my life that eloquently!

There is a lot of power in this piece (: I don't agree with it, but I have definitely felt this way before. I'm sure most of us have. The meaning and imagery behind this is very well written. It really kept me hooked in .. the last two stanzas kind of got weaker for me, but overall a nice piece.

Keep it up,
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You have a VERY well written poem here. My favorite so far. In the first stanza you made grey = gray. So, I'd switch that out. "The Grey swallows the dyes" dyes= dies and the = and. THe reason I changed the to and instead of then is because it flows better. I always thought that and was a better filler than then/than. This is my favorite by you so far. I think it's well written, well thought out, well emotionalized and has good flow.

Wow, just wow.
Increadable use of imadgry. I can defenatly relate to what you are talkign about. Your rhyme scheme is apparent through out the entire poem. It dosent waver at all.

Well Written
Sorry for the delay
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