Blanket of Sorrow

by silvertung69   Oct 25, 2007


Destiny hark-ins unto my past,
telling me ware i have been.
Feeling this loneliness,
deep in my heart,
Bringing death closer within.

The blanket of sorrows comforting silence,
surrounding my world i must leave.
Can anyone hear me?
Do you not care?
or do all of your sorrows just bleed.

Blanket of sorrow makes me feel whole.
Blanket of sorrow covers the soul.
Blanket of sorrow comforts the heart.
Blanket of sorrow begins a new start,

Spiraling downward,
the future looks bleak.
Nobody sees of that which is in me.
Answers to questions
remain so elusive.
Praying to god of all kinds,

Porcelain,
Groups.
Doorknobs & spoons.
even a few pipes and lines.
Culture addiction, this life I've been living
a flash in the pan of this world.

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  • 10 years ago

    by silvertung69

    I will be on your stoop to check your stuf out promptly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow! this was amazing! it was so deep. and i absolutely lovedd the title of this poem, very nice, very eye catching. job well done! 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

    • 10 years ago

      by silvertung69

      Thanks darling for the warm review

  • 16 years ago

    by briana

    Wow really god love the words great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Love your choice of words, objects describing everything!! great job!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I have to point out some things to you the title is amazing i love it followed by the first stanza really draws the reader in your a great writer and i love this poem keep writing...=) 5/5