Whats Wrong With Me?

by Kyle   Oct 25, 2007


Whats wrong with me?
a loser in the mirror is all i see,

i give my whole heart,
in return it gets ripped apart.

every time i give my love,
i guess i just am not enough.

one girl lied to me about her friend,
all this time she was doing other men.

another found a new guy while i was holding on,
when i found out, i asked what i did wrong...

another forced herself to kill her love for me,
what is it about me, that i cant see....

heartache and pain, but i dont blame them,
i know its my fault, i can never win...

i guess im not meant to be happy and glad,
my heart feels pain that makes me sad.

i try my best, and give my all,
why should they care if i fall...

maybe i'll be loved when im gone,
i just wish i knew what i did that was so wrong.....

this poem is about my past relationships....so yeah....

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  • 17 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Really good emotion :) so sad, makes me feel a lil of what you must of felt. :) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xFallenAngelx

    Aww this was really good.. im glad you feelin better now tho buddy :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    U deserve happieness more than anyone hun! hope yu feel beter kyle. (smile 4 me pwease!)

    mandy =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jesyka Vendetta

    :'( so say-ad! but really good as always!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kali

    Awww babe!!! I'm here now ^_^ no worries!!