My love rises

by Thermidor Jhonny   Oct 25, 2007


If "be there for you"
Is all my life about,
And "Satisfy you vow"
are all my attempt about,
Will faith still be our value?

If the fact of being nice,
Could be a good advice;
If i look up into your eyes,
It shall not melt like ice,
And cause sorrow to rise!

If there are hate and love,
And, randomly, loathsome
Is part of our unused words;
Love, on purpose, should be
One of used in preference!

If love is designed for us,
And, in fact, it has no cost,
If we know of the beginning,
& are unconscious of the end,
Shouldn't we take advantage?

If you wake up tomorrow,
Your path seems to be narrow,
Our planet reduced in size,
And goods decreased in prices,
Know that my true love rises!

By, Thermidor Jhonny

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  • 17 years ago

    by AMoreMIo

    Great poem. unique style. and great creativity! your structure is good. and emotions are great.
    -alicia