I havnt really been into poetry that didnt rhyme.. but you have changed me... i really really like this...This poem has so much meaning...perfect metaphor

Great idea! I feel the same, really sad
5/5

Great poem. I like it. It's sad when friends split up. I've lost a couple like dat but ya know everything happens for a reason. A problem is opportunity knockin at the door. Great job 5/5
-vino

P.S. that girl still hasn't left me alone.....