Heartsick

by Victoria   Oct 25, 2007


As my tears fall down your shoulder
I realize the end is too close,
Time becomes shorter and shorter,
I become out of breath,
Out of touch,
With you,
No longer.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    I like this, it seems as though a countdown is taking place with reference to the lines getting shorter.
    the mood is short yet tense, very effective
    great job 5/5
    Sarah -xo

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