Slave to my thoughts

by rachael   Oct 25, 2007


My heart feels fit to leap
I was made to fly
But something is pulling me down
Something traps my foot and drags it away
It falls over the day like a shadow cast upon the horizon
It is my conscience
And its thought is one I can't forget and choose not to
That this is foolish
I can't erase the past but I can repair the now
But what is this?
When only the day before
I had thought
That this is foolish;
Not trying hard enough for
The heart that holds on
Should it be broken asunder?
Shall my head and my heart be in conflict
Forevermore

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  • 17 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    Shut up dave. Spelling dont mtter...i can relate to this. You tend to evoke the feelings deep inside what many people dont think about...only subconciously. Its really good. Ur making something so simple sound so complex....coz it really is

  • 17 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    Shut up dave. Spelling dont mtter...i can relate to this. You tend to evoke the feelings deep inside what many people dont think about...only subconciously. Its really good. Ur making something so simple sound so hard....coz it really is

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    You need to fix up the ' in yoru poem, send me a pm if you want to know how to easily fix this...

    5/5 david