I love this. Seriously amazing, really! I like the way you picture the world crashing apart, I really liked the part with the walls closing in on you, that was so great.. Keep it up, 5/5!

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I loved the flow. Keep up the good work.
5/5

As a reader I was able to picuture your descriptions very well. I liked this one. Great job!