I read this when you handed it in for english, and i still think it rocks... you are so talented, well done.

5/5 David

Freaken awsome~~~!!!

Great write , well worded and deep, you did a wonderful job on this poem , loved the details in it and the way you let it flow ,
Head, hand and back
all in turn are hit
face in the dust
helpless as a beetle
scarlet with blood
my hands are.
keep it up , your friend Tracy ~~~5/5