You are a genius good sir - a straight up poetic genius 5/5

I thought that this was a very clever poem, indeed funny (bit naughty) but worth the read. The chocolate bars used as fillers in your poem really set of a meaning (you know they are relate to sex and all that). VERY clever and well thought out.

xxx alex xxx

Omg... that's like all you can say about it haha. it's really good i love the candy bar thing, that had to be hard, and yes it was very funny lol. interesting idea, i really wasn't expecting that one, but yes it does make you laugh lol. nice job guys.

Wow, this is a really great poem. It's good that you guys did good. I like how you guys put all the chocolates in there.

Great job!!!

7/5<---IF THAT'S POSSIBLE!!!

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Lol, this is hilarious, very creative I must say. I've never seen anythingl ike this. Amazing job, keep it up. 5/5

Diffrent, funny, and clever. excellently written, awesome word choice, I was laughing until the end. 5/5

Ha. Truly clever. I haven't heard of half the chocolate bars, but it still made me laugh. Very nice, indeed.

How utterly amazing...thihi made me giggle.. really rather clever...
5/5
tc x

Hahahahahahahahahhahaha. Oh my god I love how you used chocolate bars and i'm now never going to be able to look at a Twix the same again XD

Lmao. This was genius. I really enjoyed this one. 5/5!

` Liz =]

Haha nice some bars i never heard of but it was funny though... loving it 5/5

Crazy, I'm amazed once more with your word picking!!!

Oh this was just brilliant. It was clever and a great piece of poetry. The style was different and a great joy to read. You language it was made this poem an amazing piece. Well done *5/5* for sure.

F-ing halarious

Oh, that was wild! So funny and unique! The chocolate bar thing was just crazy! keep it up! 5/5

Wow this is amazing poem... i can't believe you thought of something like this... man you have talent... keep up the good work you deserve a 5/5 just for the creativity

xoxoxox
Jess

Rofl!!! awesome 5/5. original.

Haha this is awesome.. very very clever and amazingly written..

She jumped for *Almond Joy* and said "It's a date"

haha i love that line =)

This was really funny and are you sure they are all the differnt kinds of chocolate bars? I'm glad I'm not the only one who hasn't heard of all that chocolate, and I'm a chocoholic.
Very cleverly done!

Lmao. Wow. That was funny. Really funny. I loved it. I can't really say anything. But, I liked how you managed to keep the flow up even with all the different names. Great job.
5/5

Amber..