OMG I can't stop laughing -haha straight up funny funny men |
I thought that this was a very clever poem, indeed funny (bit naughty) but worth the read. The chocolate bars used as fillers in your poem really set of a meaning (you know they are relate to sex and all that). VERY clever and well thought out. |
Wow, this is a really great poem. It's good that you guys did good. I like how you guys put all the chocolates in there. |
by Wallace
Amazing, at first I didnt get it but then I realised that the words in astericks are actually name of chocolate bars. I loved this poem, very creative. I'm adding this to my favorites. |
by Vanessa
This is funny, clever and diffrent. the word choice is excellent, and the I laughed all the way to tthe end 5/5 |
by Liz
Haha, I loved thiss. I don't think I'll be able to eat another chocolate bar without thinking something ... nasty? Lol. Keep writing! 5/5 |
by Becca
It was different but still funny! |