Very sad but most kids go thru this, a poem well written, great job! 5/5

I can really really relate to this poem, very good 5/5

Awww sad but it has true feelings and i love that. great job

Good descriptions of emotions but I think the language was a bit simple. There were parts were you said the same thing you said before but in different words and that threw off the flow for me. All in all *4/5*

I don't like ending, also, you used-I- and -you- too many times in this poem and that ruined the flow.

U can write good, dead beat fathers, huh. A lot of emotions, careless love of a hope. U beat that feelings, neva bother you until finally felt free out of sadness at young ages. I really like this 5/5