To The Point of Stopping

by Alicia   Oct 25, 2007


I feel the anguish of raw emotion fill my heart
to the point of stopping
My feelings flow through my veins
bound to my bones
My head is pounding with the intensity
of my hurts
My fingers bleed from the words that pour
from my fingers
In desperate attempt to release
my pain
You read the words as blood splatters
on my keyboard
Forever marking this memory in
my mind
Even now these sentences fill your thoughts
as well as mine
We share a moment here
in time
Feel my hopelessness turning
in your mind
Feel the raw emotion fill your heart
to the point of stopping

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  • 17 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Excellent writing ^^ 5/5

    You read the words as blood splatters
    on my keyboard
    Forever marking this memory in
    my mind

    thatz my fav part-itz full of intense emotion good job :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Crimsonxheart

    Oh my God... You are such an excellent writer! I love you so much and I hope you can visit soon!!!