WOW.

This was such an amazing piece. It truly left me with chills. I could just imagine the pain and saddness the little boy must have endured to see that on a daily basis. And the ending was just perfect, truly blew me away.

Well done *5/5*

WOW!
totally love this poem, so dark and chilling! its amazing and im so jelous!! the end was wicked, to two last lines. beautifull ending!

xx

Wow....amazing poem! I loved the twist at the end....it took me by suprise! Very dark and well written....i could feel the sadness the little boy felt....amazing write....keep up the awesome work!!!!!! 5/5

AWESOME POEM FLOW WAS INPECKABLE
5/5 I LOVE YOUR WORK