Know how you feel been there done that still doing it but the poem could use work ... it's so how do i say it...vague as in describe more of whats going on if you can and let us feel what you feel.
thats a rough explination but message me if you want me to explain better

Hey i have felt the same way and i still do i know what u r going through

This is really good alot of people could relate to it i know i can soo good job =]