by Miranda
Excellent.Beautifully sad.Imaginitive.Fantastic Imagery.Deep emotions.Great wording. |
by Epistemo
Wow really good...REALLY good..You should keep writing more..made me kinda sad there.. |
by Shinobi
Wow, one of the best metaphors I had ever seen. A really nice job with the rhyming and emotion expressing. Liked it very much 5/5 |
The expresion is simply amazing. |
by Tammie
This is beautiful. The imagery, description and metaphors in it you wrote were excellent. I could really feel how you are feeling. The rhyming was impressive, as was the flow. I like the concept of it, and although it is short, it says a lot, I love that. :] |
by Allison
This was beautiful and I can relate a lot to it, its how I feel right now. Your flow was nice and pure, keep up the good work. *5/5* |
Sad, yet very beautiful. I liked this poem, the way you wrote it. You definately explained the feeling quite well in this short poem. Great job. 5/5 |
by Ashley
I felt really inspired by this piece..love it 5/5 |
Its interesting how you chose to display this poem and the whole wilting rose really worked, nice job |
Once again a fantastic title that will lure the reader in, the imagery in the first few lines were terrific. Every rose must die someday no matter how well it was taken care of. Amazing job 5/5 GG23 |
by Alexa Eudis
I like it a lot. great comparison |
Wow. great poem. && great imgination. i liked it alot. 5/5 |