by RobinAnn13 Oct 26, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
People leave and people die |
"People leave and people die |
by jLegendc
I really like the message of this poem.. it talks about the reality of life.. of how cruel it is.. this can touch people's hearts by the message your trying to tell them... wow this is great! =] |
The title of your poem is simple yet you keep it short and don't sugarcoat it nor try and add drama by adding words onto it. I like that and even though it is supposed to be sad, jsut by the title it could mean the state of the world in a negative or positive way. |
by HaileyHelen
OMG! beautiful! everything about this poem was flawless the rhyme the flow ! PERFECTION! |
Great way at explainin the poem. It is really sad. 5/5 |