Luv this poem i can relate to it i try and forget the past and move on but everyday it just comes back :P
i luv the way you worded it and it was very emotional great work

5/5

Luv this poem i can relate to it i try and forget the past and move on but everyday it just comes back :P
i luv the way you worded it and it was very emotional great work

5/5

Really nice dark poem, you highlight how our past always comes back to prey on our minds.

One thing I really like about this poem is the rhyme structure - I like how the rhyming lines move about in each stanza. Very unique and adds a nice twist to it.

Nice work

[5/5]
~Pete.

Mad az poem i can relate i also love the way yu have worded iiht...iiht is very sad but very true.. my past just wont leave me the hell alone

GREAT WORK AND POETRY SKILLS

[5/5] also

xx chez

This was amazing!
I loved everything about it. It was real easy for me to relate to it which made it more of a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

Interesting poem, you wrote it nicely but if you use some metaphors it would be a lot better and atmosphere could be much deeper with better choice of words.
Anyway, that is just my opinion.