Njabulo
It is hard to live without the one we love. I like the way you have expressed these feelings.
Good job!
Take Care Cindy

Amazing work,felt every word
keep it up!

I can relate to this one
i just cant live without my girlfriend
we've fallen in love and now i believe we're about to have a child (because we were stupid and decided not to use our brains)
even with this happening i feel as if we're getting closer and closer to eachother with love growing ever stronger i will love her no matter what and forever
thank you for this WONDERFUL read, Njabulo
i give this poem a 5/5 id give it more if it were possible