Comments : Lets Drink To The Pain Of Your Neurotic Behavior.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really liked this piece. It was quite unusal expecially how you used the similiarity of dogs and humans. Interesting. I liked how you aptured my attention from the first stanza and kept me interested from start to finish. Your word choice simple yet so effective and the flow was smoothe and didn't go off track what so ever. A nicely penned poem Teria. Keep up the good work. ~Mel