Comments : Comrades in Arms

  • 16 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Very interesting and unique, loved the choice of words and the flow, great write = )

  • 16 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Dispite- Despite

    hi Katherine.
    I shall comment your poem! Ye Gods!

    Well aspects are eccentric, and could easily be misunderstood. the flow could have been better, simply adding a break between lines does not make them separate. Liked the theme/ story though.

    Not bad, Sister. Not bad.

  • It doesnt have the same rhyme sceam but i still love it... you do amazing work.... and well i didnt really find anything wrong with it... so GODD JOB!