Hey,
nice poem, although I think its more appropriate in the explicit genre. I also think its like a song. anyway loved, great rhyming and flow, keep up the good work 5/5
kisses stephanie

Sex=love?
since when?
i thought it was love=sex..BUT HEY WHAT DO I KNOW?
lol
kidding.
YOU SAID 'BABY' TOO MUCH...
j.l.y.k
but then again..that is the title
*try a different word
; )

DANG!!!!! hehe it was good! really good hehe just e mailed it 2 mii boyfriend! LMAO

This was gud... but alot of people wouldn't agree

Hahaha so u wanna ...my place ....tonight...hahaha great poem reali love the sense of security and trust they have .....

This is the perfect erotic poem 5/5 u said lets turn up the heat u did it that is for sure great job David. I am sure I'll be reading many more of yours real soon.

Wow this is an incredible poem.full of feeling.great job!5/5
**harlea