Ahh I love this, written based on so raw emotions, whole poem is really clear to read and so easy to connect to. Flowed really well and rhymed perfect.
Wonderful piece!
5/5 Keep up.

Wow, 5/5!!!
this is an angry one, your emotions just pour out and it's so honest. i really like this one, another great piece!
it is just full of great lines, and the whole piece flows really well.
soo true and easy to relate to cos of your choice of words if that makes sense!!!
great stuff!!! x

This poem is really good. I really like it, and feel the same way you do. Its really good. Keep up the good work. ~Neely~

My exterior is so quite while my insides scream
Just thinking about it makes it hard to breath
^ these lines were the icing ontop of the cake 4 me! this poem was beautifully written! fantastic job!

An excellent poem.
i like the repetition of the first stanza.
this was very well written. && nicely portrayed.
def. 5/5.

Good job on this. it had so so much emotion in it. i loved the rawness of it, it added to the poem. it was very relateable.