How To Say Goodbye

by Fan Angeleo   Oct 27, 2007


Wrapping these gifts
wasn't easy.
Tomorrow maybe too late
Where and when life just
does not state.
I probably forgot to tell you I
love you.
I must say this before your date.
You are not dying still this very much
feels like a wake.
Why would you leave me crying,
I hurt inside but I try my best to fake.
Will I see you again, that question is
up to fate.
These gifts are my memories wrapped up
which shows my love for you.
Goodbye would not suffice that space in
my heart, a place kept reserve just
waiting for you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    I like this poem, but it seems a little over done and cheesy in some areas...for example

    "feels like a wake.
    Why would you leave me crying,
    I hurt inside but I try my best to fake.
    Will I see you again, that question is
    up to fate."

    I dont think to have it rythme with all the words, for as long as u did makes it very intense.... I like the whole feel and emotion of the poem, but I think it could have been structured and written a bit better.. if you dont really understand just pm me, im glad to help and thanks for ur comment! =D
    but you do have some talent there and oh, AUSSIES RULE! woot woot! =D

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